Ethereal-dev: Re: [Ethereal-dev] Reviewed and updated "User's Guide" available

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From: Graeme Hewson <ghewson@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tue, 03 Aug 2004 19:39:33 +0100
Ulf Lamping wrote:


Descriptions under figure 3.2: run-on sentences. ", see" should be
". See".



Sorry, didn't found the place to change
I mean each item under figure 3.2. E.g., File: "... in whole or in part, and to quit from Ethereal. See Section 3.5, ..." 





Table 3.9:

Stop Capture: remove comma after "This icon is shown,"



changed



Other items: as menu



What do you mean?


Sorry, I don't know! :-)


3.15: "such as" would be preferable to "like" in "(like the Ethernet
addresses)" and "(like the IP addresses)". 


don't get the point
"Like" sounds too informal to me, and not right. It's also ambiguous: it can mean "such as" or "for example", but it can also mean "in the same manner as" (which is nonsensical, of course -- ethernet addresses don't write data).