Ulf Lamping wrote:
We have version1.92 now...
Please continue reviewing ...
2.1 I suggest this:
Ethereal is distributed with most free operating systems. If you use a
commercial operating system, or if you would like to get a more recent
version of Ethereal than that supplied with your operating system, you
can:
* Obtain a binary package for your operating system, or
* Obtain the source and build Ethereal for your operating system.
The following are the general steps you would use:
[the rest of the section is unchanged]
1. Download the relevant package ...
2...
3...
2.2 first note, first sentence, change to:
"If you are building Ethereal from source, you might need to install
several other packages first."
2.2 second note, first sentence, change to:
"If you don't use one of the officially-supported platforms (Windows,
Red Hat Linux / Fedora or Solaris), there are still binary packages
available, but they tend to be several versions behind the current
released version."
2.3, last paragraph on p.16 of PDF:
"Most Linux systems install GTK+ and Glib by default in any case;
however, you will probably need to ..."
2.8.1 second sentence should be "... informed about new Ethereal
versions. See Section ..."
Should chapter 2 be relegated to an appendix, along with section 1.7?
Appendix D: should we update to version 1.2 of the GFDL?
